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The following is a poem from my blog, I would like some feed back.
Sunday, June 14, 2009
Can You
Can you hear my heart
it is saying, “I love you”
can you see the desire
I have for you in my eyes
when I touch you
can you feel the security I can give
trust me
can you
When our lips touch
can you feel the tingle in your body
and as we caress each other
can you feel that our love is growing
when the foreplay begins
can you feel the ecstasy building
as we make love
can you feel the penetration of paradise
trust me
can you
Can you imagine
a love that never dies
can you envision the two of use
together forever
when I say I love you
can you believe it’s true
when I ask you to marry me
can you say yes
trust me
can you.
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